Guys here is my comments on the design experiments u have ... generally speaking u have to choose one of them and start to develop because no time anymore to do same work in parallel three of u
Exp1: 1- why the storage spaces have this shape ?? what is the reason behind it , it have to be explained 2- Energy tower: Define function. it have to be explain because if you using it as way to take the air out from the recycling process u have to think about this bad smell and the wind direction and speed ..... and if its wind catching .. do u really need that.. need explanation. 3-I can see the proposal from these slides is based only on site analysis and have nothing to do with research and the parameters u said u want to use to design; in another words its not computing anymore its traditional way of design. so please if their is data behind lead to this shape it have to be accompanied and explained.
Exp2: Behavior particles of the material under the influence of various factors can be a good start and strong one but it need to be get more developed and translated to reasonable architecture. the first two slides are good explained but i am missing the link between them and slide 26 which have these new shapes and in slide 27 it turned to be sculpture with this kind of holes structure ...may be i am missing something in between need to be well explained. if these holes are coming out from the environmental studies which is after in the presentation okay then i will buy it but then u have a missing chain which have to be clearly explaining the developing of the idea and form.
Exp3: sorry but i cant understand it..no explanation at all so i cant judge it.
and again Really very important the titles of each slide so others can understand and to proof its a real info graphic which carry alot of diff layers of analysis and not only cool graphics
good luck guys and stay focused on one idea to develop it as much as u can.
Guys here is my comments on the design experiments u have ... generally speaking u have to choose one of them and start to develop because no time anymore to do same work in parallel three of u
ReplyDeleteExp1:
1- why the storage spaces have this shape ?? what is the reason behind it , it have to be explained
2- Energy tower: Define function. it have to be explain because if you using it as way to take the air out from the recycling process u have to think about this bad smell and the wind direction and speed ..... and if its wind catching .. do u really need that.. need explanation.
3-I can see the proposal from these slides is based only on site analysis and have nothing to do with research and the parameters u said u want to use to design; in another words its not computing anymore its traditional way of design.
so please if their is data behind lead to this shape it have to be accompanied and explained.
Exp2:
Behavior particles of the material under the influence of various factors can be a good start and strong one but it need to be get more developed and translated to reasonable architecture.
the first two slides are good explained but i am missing the link between them and slide 26 which have these new shapes and in slide 27 it turned to be sculpture with this kind of holes structure ...may be i am missing something in between need to be well explained.
if these holes are coming out from the environmental studies which is after in the presentation okay then i will buy it but then u have a missing chain which have to be clearly explaining the developing of the idea and form.
Exp3: sorry but i cant understand it..no explanation at all so i cant judge it.
and again Really very important the titles of each slide so others can understand and to proof its a real info graphic which carry alot of diff layers of analysis and not only cool graphics
good luck guys and stay focused on one idea to develop it as much as u can.